“It’s not real.”
The building and pier are quite real, Jonathan.”
“But the scene inside the cafe looks like a painting, Raven.”
“Simply step through the door as you did previously.”
Jonathan Cypher walked toward the painting on the building in the English coastal town. Then there was an actual door and everything changed.
“It is now 1927. The men inside are members of the Communist party. A Soviet agent has recruited them to assassinate the King of England. You must stop them.”
The man without a past stepped back in time ninety years on his mission to rewrite history.
I authored this for the Rochelle Wisoff-Fields writing challenge for 26 January 2018. The idea is to use the image above as the inspiration for crafting a piece of flash fiction no more than 100 words long. My word count is 100.
I did a Google image search and discovered the Pier Head Cafe is located at Swanage Pier in Southern England. The Bizarro comic strip for 24 January 2018 depicted a one-panel joke set in 1927 so I had the year stuck in my head. I looked up 1927 at Wikipedia and discovered the following items:
- January 19 – Great Britain sends troops to China to protect foreign nationals from spreading anti-foreign riots in Central China.
- March 24 – Nanking Incident: After six foreigners have been killed in Nanking and it appears that Kuomintang and Communist Party of China forces would overrun the foreign consulates, warships of the U.S. Navy and the British Royal Navy fire shells and shot to disperse the crowds.
- November 12 – Leon Trotsky is expelled from the Soviet Communist Party, leaving Joseph Stalin with undisputed control of the Soviet Union.
So I hatched a plot of the Communist party of China to assassinate King George V of England. The man who is passing himself off as a Soviet agent is really working for the Chinese (I edited this paragraph to be more historically accurate as per my conversation with Neil below). The word limit prevented me from explaining things in more detail.
I once again am using the characters Jonathan Cypher and Raven last seen in The Kepler Tomb. Of course there was no real plot to assassinate the King of England in 1927, but I needed to make up something.
To read other stories based on the prompt, go to InLinkz.com.
Communist China didn’t exist in my 1927, but perhaps it did in his. Why did they want to assassinate the King?
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Okay so I goofed a bit, but there were anti-foreigner riots in China in 1927 and the British sent troops and naval vessels to quell the violence. I pretended that the Chinese government didn’t like that too much and decided to retaliate by killing England’s King. You make a good suggestion, though. Since Cypher travels to different quantum universes, this one might have had Communist China in 1927.
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I’ll buy that
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Wait. According to the Wikipedia page for 1927: March 24 – Nanking Incident: After six foreigners have been killed in Nanking and it appears that Kuomintang and Communist Party of China forces would overrun the foreign consulates, warships of the U.S. Navy and the British Royal Navy fire shells and shot to disperse the crowds.
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There was a Chinese Communist Party, but no Communist China. That was created iin 1949
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Ok. Thanks for the clarification.
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Always those pesky Commies up to no good. Some things never change, no matter what history your in!
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Don’t look at me. Stalin was very much in charge of the USSR in 1927 and as my notes say, the Communist Party of China was making a mess of things as well. 😉
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Dear James,
This has a Quantum Leapish feel to it. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks, Rochelle. Of course Jonathan isn’t “leaping” into someone else’s identity.
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That was utterly fascinating. Loved your take on the prompt!
Susan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
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Thanks, Susan.
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I like the way you reverse trompe l’oeil. That’s a nice twist on the prompt!
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Thanks, Penny. When I saw the photo, I imagined real people frozen in time.
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You did a lot of background work before you put finger to keyboard. Well done!
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Thanks, Sandra. Research is half the fun.
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There have been tons of plots to assassinate the King of England over the centuries. I kind of doubt the Soviet or Chinese would bother due to issues of power. More likely to be Uncle Richard.
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But it still makes a great story
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Thanks, Alice. I guess some plots work better than others.
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I’ve been reading The Gulag Archipelago recently. It’s unbelievable that anybody in the Soviet Union survived the purges.
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I think that book was on my reading list some decades back but I’m not sure I have the stamina for it now. Yes, humanity has been through brutal times and in some places of the world, it’s still that harsh.
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i wonder if one can really redo the past without negatively impacting the future. i guess we won’t know until he tries. 🙂
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Actually, he’s done it before: Saving One.
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Enjoyed the SF perspective of history. Makes me wonder if the present discord around the globe is being hatched in ‘future’ to alter the course of history.
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It might also mean that the world could have been a worse or at least different place if someone wasn’t repairing the worst of what could have happened.
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A circular debate ending on the person repairing the worst ………
Not an easy issue to introspect. 🙂
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Very true.
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In an alternate version/continuation of this story, they succeed. How would the world have changed then? Unlimited possibilities…
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Well, since King George V of England was never assassinated in real life, I guess things would look like they do now for the most part.
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What a great take James. I love that idea of alternate histories, what would the world be like if X had happened instead of Y. What would the world have looked like if George V had been assasinated? Who knows, but it would be interesting to explore the possibilities
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Except in this case, my “hero” is trying to avoid that change. Thanks, Lynn.
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Very true. My pleasure 🙂
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Creepy, I always worry about history changing though I’m sure he knows what he’s doing. I love his name – I wishI was called “Jonathan Cypher” 🙂
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Me too. Thanks.
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Neat story – even if you did cheat by using lots more words to expand it! 🙂
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Technically that’s the “afterword” explaining the story. 😉
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Most interesting take on the prompt. And boy, did you ever do research!
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It doesn’t take as long as you might imagine, Dale. Thanks.
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It’s intriguing isn’t it? That time travel might actually be possible and we might be future or past selves in the present. Great take, James!
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Actually, I hope time travel isn’t possible. We’d make a big mess of things.
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I’ve always enjoyed history and historical research and have contemplated if it could be changed.
I.e.: If you could have visited a European Jewish community in 1934 with the message, “Get out now, while you can,” would anyone have heeded?
There was a fellow in the 30s Winnipeg, who’d lived in Germany in the 20s. He told people, “Hitler’s going to start another war.” Everyone said he was a nutcase.
Getting people to pay attention and do something can be a hopeless task.
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My understanding is that the Jewish population in Germany in the 1930s were very well assimilated into the culture. Many of them considered themselves Germans first and Jews second and they were truly baffled when the persecution began. I suppose given that, not many people would heed a time traveler’s warning. Events only look so apparent after they’ve occurred.
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Old movie: “The Eagle has Landed”.
Your tale reminded me of this movie. Excellent.
mine:
https://kindredspirit23.wordpress.com/2018/01/26/a-whimsical-tale/
Scott
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Thanks, Kindred.
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Welcome, James
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I wonder what would happen if we changed history like this… maybe it wouldn’t make any difference in the end.
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We probably wouldn’t notice anything had changed and believe that it was all still “normal.”
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Fascinating story. Appreciate the historical research you did to come up with this.
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Thanks, Magarisa. Just a look at Wikipedia.
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