A small group of amateur astronomers had gathered at Ted’s farm outside Garden Valley to photograph the Lyrid meteor shower that year. It was late and just about everyone had gone back to Boise, taking their cameras and telescopes with them. Only Ted’s trusty old Nixon was on its tripod still aimed at the heavens.
Ted had a dark room in the shed out back but he’d never get to develop the film. Everyone had photographed something unusual from the farm’s unique vantage point that night and they all died within a week.
Ted was next.
I wrote this for the Rochelle Wisoff-Fields photo writing challenge. The idea is to use the image above as the inspiration for crafting a piece of flash fiction no more than 100 words long. Mine is 96 words.
The camera pointing up reminded me of when I took Astronomy classes at UNLV during the early to mid 1970s. Sometimes we’d go out to the desert at night to look at different stellar phenomena through telescopes and to photograph some of them.
The Lyrid meteor shower is typically observed every April and this year will be best seen in the early morning hours of April 22.
To read other stories based on the prompt, go to InLinkz.com.
Nice one, James. Full of mystery and dread
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Thanks, Neil.
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I wasn’t familiar with all the various periodic meteor showers, which include the Quadrantids in January, the Lyrids in April, the Eta Aquarids in May, the (more familiar) Perseids in August, the Draconids and the Orionids in October, the Leonids in November (also more familiar), and the Geminids in December, each of which is named for a constellation from which it appears to originate at the time. Thanks for choosing one that made me look it up. The story reminded me of the film “Night of the Comet”.
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I remember watching that film on VHS back in the day, but only once. Had to look it up to recall the plot.
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Dear James,
A bit of mystery for these stargazers. Nicely done. Thanks for the link.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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You’re welcome, Rochelle. Thanks for the complement.
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The hazards of looking for secrets of the stars. Great tale.
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It normally isn’t hazardous at all, yarnspinnerr. Thanks.
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I’d love to know exactly what the unique thing might be.
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That’s a mystery and one that was the direct cause of Ted’s death along with everyone who had observed the skies the night of the Lyrid meteor shower.
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Let’s hope this doesn’t come true at the end of April!
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You never know, Iain. Thanks.
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Perhaps by the end of April you may see a clearer distinction between fiction and prophecy. [:)]
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Maybe, although I can hardly claim to be a prophet. 😉
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Actually, James, I was trying to reply to Iain, but I must have entered it into the wrong space.
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You’re right. Your comment says “In reply to Iain Kelly” but I read it wrong. Sorry.
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I wonder what it was that caused them to cease life. I’m thinking it was something mental. Well done on the intrigue!
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I was thinking they were assassinated, but was it by aliens or the government…or both?
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Strange mystery. Fascinating.
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Thank you, Jilly.
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That is definitely not how they will get more people interested in astronomy!
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I suspect that whoever killed these astronomers doesn’t want interest paid to certain observations, Dale.
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MMMmmmm, a mystery indeed.
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Yep. Just be glad you weren’t taking photos on Ted’s farm that night.
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Something strange and mysterious brewing under the stars. Nicely done.
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Thank you.
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Let sleeping stars lie, I say.
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No one is sure exactly what was captured in those photographs, the stars, or something from them.
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Wow. I’d love to see what they captured on the film – then again perhaps I wouldn’t.
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Trust me. You’ll live a longer life not knowing. 😉
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I thought that might be the case.
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Love a bit of mystery and suspense, leaving it up to the reader’s imagination to add their own contribution to the plot.
I thought yours linked up well with Neil’s. Seems like his character did the right thing nipping into the bushes instead of capturing the event.
xx Rowena
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Thanks, Rowena. Any connection to Neel’s tale is accidental since I don’t read the other stories based on the prompt until I create my own.
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Sometimes I find that some of the stories run together, which can be interesting. Have you ever done a writing exercise where you write a sentence on a topic and fold it over and then pass it to the next person and at the end you unravel it to make a poem? I did it at uni and it was a lot of fun and these flash fictions can pull together sometimes in a similar way.
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Nope. Cant say that I have, Rowena.
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They can be very funny and even thought provoking or just plain silly.
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Eek, don’t develop the film, Ted! I’m too scared to look at meteor showers in case I go blind and the Triffids get me.
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Good thing there aren’t any Triffids in real life, eh? Thanks.
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Y’know, James, for such a short story it’s amazing how much speculation it has generated about why the astronomers died. If I may attempt to list the possibilities:
1. They were exposed to some sort of radiation from the meteors or from the region of space above them.
2. They were exposed to some sort of poisonous particulate precipitate from the meteors or from the region of space above them (perhaps coincidental and not actually related to the meteors themselves).
3. They were executed by extraterrestrials who observed them photographing something not intended to be detected by humans.
4. They were executed by sinister agents of a governmental or private organization who observed them photographing something not intended to be detected by civilians or revealed to the public (also possibly merely coincidental with the timing of the meteors and not connected with them otherwise).
5. Triffids? Who suggested bringing them into the story? They weren’t connected with meteors or even with extraterrestrials in the scifi stories that defined them. And even if some precipitate from the meteors were biologically active, germinated and grew very fast, there would have to exist some sort of “marker” on the astronomers to make them its specific targets. More likely would be a biological contaminant or virus to which they could have been exposed, which is a sub-possibility of number 2 above.
Thus, it seems, has arisen curiosity about what might appear on the photographic film. The speculation about it being unhealthy to learn that answer would have to be based on number 4 above, though there is a minimal possibility of number 3 if the extraterrestrials had agents on the planet following the astronomers in the manner of number 4.
But the speculation about going blind from observing a meteor shower is more than merely exaggerated. The light flux is far too low, even if a very large meteor is burning its way right toward one. Of course, there was no hint in your story of anyone being blinded, even by possibility number 1 above; and viewing an image on photographic film certainly could not do so, because photographs are passive objects that merely reflect ambient light, or filter a nominally bright light source in viewing the negative.
I suppose that’s the problem with an extremely short story. It leaves so many loose ends about which to speculate for how the story might have developed further.
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I was thinking maybe 3 or 4 or possibly a combination of the two actually.
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Nonetheless you’ve spared us the “lurid” details, haven’t you? [:)]
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Indeed I have. Just like the old time movies and radio shows, I’ve left “lurid” to the imagination.
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(And you didn’t even complain about my lurid/lyrid pun.)
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Maybe I’m getting used to you. 😀
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My money would be on terrestrial assassination. You tell the story well, James, with plenty of scope for your readers to interpret as they wish.
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Thanks, Penny.
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Ah, we thought along similar lines this week, James – nicely atmospheric and unknowable
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Thank you, Lynn.
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My pleasure
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OOOOuuuuu James, good story.
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Thanks, Dan.
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Yikes. Just for watching a meteor shower?
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It’s what they inadvertently photographed during the meteor shower, something they never should have been allowed to see.
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Scary.
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ted and company must have inhaled something extraterrestrial in nature. it was so bad that it killed them.
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Well, something did. Thanks.
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Oh wow! What a mystery…like a curse. I wonder what musthe be kept secret?
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The answer to that is usually fatal. 😉
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Lol!
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Uh-oh. Something nasty this way comes.
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Indeed, Sandra. Thanks.
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Some meteors don’t like to be photographed in the shower. Obviously, Lyrid is one of those. 🙂
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Yes. Very shy. Thanks, Russell.
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I love the unexpected mystery in this!
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Thank you. I never thought such a short story which I wrote in just a few minutes (not including research) would generate so much interest.
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Great take – I had a similar idea 🙂
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Well at least you only “disappeared” one person. You get up at 7 a.m.? Monday through Friday that’s when I leave home for work.
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This really sparks the imagination.
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Thank you, Dawn.
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Ted’s farm sounds like a dangerous place to be!
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Only during a meteor shower, Sascha.
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I wonder if it’s a simple example of a toxic dump at Ted’s farm or something sinister in the meteors.
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That suggestion would be a variation of number 2 in my posted list above, of possible causes for the deaths.
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eeeks. they died?
but fun zapper way to end it – (note to self – do not photograph there…)
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Now you’ve got me wondering what they all saw. 🙂 Oh, and I heard the Twilight Zone theme, too. 🙂
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That’s the mystery, Jan. The answer proved to be fatal to all of the witnesses. Thanks.
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Never knew star-gazing was so dangerous. Great take.
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On rare occasion, it can be. Thanks.
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