“Citizens. You are being watched. It is now safe to cross the street.” The simulated voice from the cross walk camera sounded both melodious and ominous.
“I think it’s creepy how the government is allowed to put up surveillance cameras everywhere.” Joan was complaining to her co-worker Fran as the two of them continued their lunch hour walk.
“It’s to keep us safe. No one can carry a gun or a knife anywhere without being seen.”
“But even in the bathrooms? It’s embarrassing.”
“Only robots using algorithms to detect dangerous activity are watching. Besides, you can’t have everything. To be safe, you have to give up something.”
“I can’t even make love to my husband anymore without feeling guilty. Why do they have to be in our bedrooms, too?”
“Excuse me.”
The two women stopped as they were approached by a police officer.
“I’m Officer Jill Conrad. Our monitors detected what could be interpreted as subversive speech during your conversation. Mind if I ask you a few questions?”
I wrote this for the FFfAW Challenge for the Week of March 27, 2018. The idea is to use the image above to inspire crafting a piece of flash fiction between 100 and 175 words long. My word count is 168.
The photo looked kind of sterile and “futuristic,” or more like how the future was imagined in the 1960s. So I wrote a small, dystopian tale about how “Big Brother” (see George Orwell’s novel “1984”) was everywhere, watching all the time, including in our bathrooms and bedrooms, all in the cause of keeping us safe.
Am I being ridiculous? There was a time when I thought I could travel by commercial air without having my genitals either photographed or touched, and yet we all seem to accept that as “normal” now.
To read other stories based on the prompt, go to InLinkz.com.
I love this James. It does have that same creepy feel as 1984. Well done! 🙂
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Thanks, Penny. Actually, there are a whole lot of webcams watching public places already including store parking lots and traffic intersections. I doubt that anyone will be putting cameras in bathrooms and bedrooms, but if you have a webcam, either USB or built into your computer monitor, it can be hacked (even when the “on” light isn’t illuminated) so you can be watched where ever your computer is. Some people put a piece of tape over the lens whenever they don’t want to use it. Just sayin’.
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I know. And agree. Scary stuff.
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This is really happening and not only through webcams.
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Sadly true, yarnspinnerr.
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Eerily Orwellian. And too close you our modern reality. Well done.
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Too close *to* our modern reality. Damn autocorrect (or my fat fingers on my iPhone’s virtual keyboard).
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Thanks. Yeah, autocorrect is a mother bear.
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It feels like now as well as the future that is coming. Good stuff James.
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Thanks, Iain.
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The future is here.
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Alas.
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I think that’s why I am lost in Jellystone… sorry… Yellowstone National Park over on WPS. Gonna post another story imminently One I have just read to a teacher in the staffroom of a school I am visiting with my wife and I had her in tear – the teacher not my wife.
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Oh wow. Can’t wait to read it.
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It’s not ridiculous. This is England, land of Orwell. My town’s welcome sign once included a line about it being safer thanks to CCTV until someone told the council it might create a negative impression. The sign was changed, though the cameras remain.
I enjoyed your story. Thanks
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And I thought this sort of thing only happened in America. Thanks.
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It is pretty much like this now! Creepy! We are being watched wherever we go. Great story, James!
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Thanks, Joy. Still hoping no one’s peeping in on me in the loo or bedroom.
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Hahahaha! I feel you!
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We truly are living in a Big Brother society, and it will probably get worse. I just saw a tweet today, of a little boy talking to Mark Zuckerberg. The Boy says: My dad says you are spying on us. Mark Zuckerbeg answers: He’s not your dad.
Great story, James.
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Thanks, Aak. Hope that video was staged. If not, Zuckerberg must be a bigger jerk than I thought.
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Haha, no, don’t worry. It was just an image with a text. Probably just a joke 😀
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Oh. A meme. Yeah, I just saw it on Facebook.
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But still, he knows.
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Reblogged this on PliscaPlace and commented:
Sad to say 1984 is here and now
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James,
Blogger and scarily,,can see the not so distant future.. Bravo James
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There is no end to which this madness can continue. Recently, in Delhi, the government approved a plan to install CCTVs in classrooms, and give live access to parents of the students studying in each class. https://www.ndtv.com/delhi-news/at-government-schools-in-delhi-parents-to-get-access-to-live-cctv-feed-1801456
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I need to circle back and read these stories. Thanks for the reminder.
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Nice piece! Big Brother is always scary to think about. Especially when you think what it’ll be like 20-30 years from now (or even sooner).
Not gonna lie, your genitals comment had me laughing, though.😅
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Or now. Thanks and glad you laughed.
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Yes! Or now😬
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