Jeannie and Richard met outside the Chelsea Beach Bar in Atlantic City, their hometown. She had barely been able to hold in her tears, but became hysterical when he’d gotten out of his car and walked over to her. There was nothing left for the PI to do but hold his old girlfriend and let her cry. The Marine veteran’s instincts never let him tune out his surroundings, such as the multicolored para-sail against a dull blue sky and the sound of the wind blowing through the grass.
“You’re going to find them for me.” She’d finally stopped sobbing.
“I figured that’s why you called me after so long.”
“We were going to get married. He wanted to wait until after tomorrow’s boxing match in Vegas to announce it.”
“You know when I find them, it won’t help. He’ll still be dead.”
“I know. But he deserves justice. I don’t trust the cops on this one. I think they’re in on it. Habib thought the fight was rigged.”
“I know. I’ll find his killers.
I wrote this for the 183rd FFfAW Challenge hosted by Priceless Joy. The idea is to use the image above as the prompt for crafting a piece of flash fiction between 100 and 175 words long. My word count is 174.
I looked up The Chelsea Beach Bar since it’s figured prominently in the photo, and found it is in Atlantic City. I looked up the local news and discovered that Atlantic City boxer Qa’id Muhammad was found murdered yesterday near Las Vegas. I decided not to use Muhammad’s name in my story and to fictionalize the crime out of respect for the grieving family.
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Oooh the start to a murder mystery, I’m intrigued! Great writing, James.
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Thanks, Jade.
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Although based on reality, it sounds like a good set up for a classic noir story.
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Thanks. Then I accomplished my goal.
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How sad that the boxer was murdered and her engagement was off. Great story, James!
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Thank you.
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What a sad story. It does sound like the plot of a really good movie. Great job on the prompt, James 🙂
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Thanks.
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