The little boy approached the calf timidly. Grandpa thought little Teddy would enjoy visiting the farm. He’d lived in Seattle all his life and this was his first trip to Idaho. He’d be here all summer long before having to return to his Dad.
“It’s okay, boy.” Grandpa crouched down beside the child. He won’t hurt you. Go ahead and pet his nose.”
Teddy walked forward. He looked back at his Grandpa, who smiled and nodded reassuringly. Then the boy slowly reached out to the calf, which obediently let the child rub the fur above his nose. Teddy smiled for the first time in months, and then giggled.
Now maybe the healing could begin. The calf knew what it was to lose a mother, too.
Written in response to the FFfAW Challenge-Week of February 28, 2017 hosted by Priceless Joy. The challenge is to use the photo prompt above to write a piece of flash fiction between 100 and 175 words, with a word count of 150 being ideal. My story came in at exactly 125 words.
To read other stories based on the same prompt, go to InLinkz.com.
Oh James, such a touching story! I think Teddy and the calf are going to be very good friends! Wonderful story!
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The plan is for Teddy to enter the calf into a 4F competition at the summer’s fair. He’ll learn a lot over the next three months.
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Yes, he sure will and will become close friends with Teddy.
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This was such a well crafted tale. The last line was a real clincher. You nailed it, James.
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Aww, I loved the sweet and uplifting ending! Healing comes in all shapes and sizes 🙂
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Touching tale James, a different side to your writing. Well done.
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Thanks, Iain.
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This was so sweet and kind. Now they both can heal together.
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Sometimes you have to give a hurting kid someone or something to relate to.
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That is definitely correct.
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The last sentence ended the story on a sad, but touching note! I hope this is the start of a long and beautiful friendship.
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Me too, Chris. Thanks.
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Oh ho!! such a nice story and touch to it .. Good one James
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Thanks, Su.
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Hi, I’m majesticgoldenrose, and I am glad you used my prompt. Great post, btw! The last line just melts your heart. very nice!
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Thanks, Majestic. I struggled for a moment or two on what to write, and then it just flowed.
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Oh my, wasn’t expecting that ending, beautiful lead up to the final statement. 👏🏽
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Thank you for your kind words.
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Aww! I hope they both find healing; animal and boy. This is touching and beautiful.
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Yes, I think that’s how it turns out. Thanks.
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