Doing What’s Necessary


© Maria @ Doodles and Scribbles

Yosemite National Park has gone downhill since I was a kid. We used to come here every Spring and Fall for the bicycle rallies. Some entered the races, but a lot of us just liked to ride around the main road inside the park.

Now look at it. Bastards have carved their initials into everything, and the park has been so defunded, that no one’s here to stop them.

Why doesn’t this country take care of its resources anymore? It’s all about building safe zones for people’s feelings, restricting free speech, and generally stroking the fragile egos of children who have no idea they have the strength to suffer someone else’s opinion and live.

It’s up to me and my generation to make it right, to show the kids coming up that they can be strong, too. The enemy isn’t someone else’s opinion, it’s seeing where there are real problems and having the courage to solve them.

I’m going into that water to get rid of the graffiti. Who’s going to come with me?

I wrote this in response to the FFfAW Challenge-Week of April 11, 2017 hosted by Priceless Joy. The idea is to write a piece of flash fiction between 100 and 175 words with the ideal being about 150. Mine comes in at 174.

I realize some of what I’ve written may be controversial. Many students on today’s university campus feel that free speech is hate speech unless it conforms specifically to their required norms. In my opinion, it’s not so much about safe places and the perception of microaggressions, but taking a look at real, tangible problems, and then diving in to help fix them.

In the late 1970s, every Spring and Fall, Yosemite hosted bicycle festivals and races. My friends and I would drive up from the Bay Area and participate. It was great fun, and a chance to visit one of the most beautiful nature areas in the world.

We really need to keep our priorities straight. No matter what your politics or social imperatives, we all have to share the same world, so we might as well all work together to protect it. We can come out of our shells long enough to do that, can’t we?

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12 thoughts on “Doing What’s Necessary

    • Thanks, Kris. Yes, that last paragraph is pregnant with meaning, or it could be. Does Ron just want to share his gift with her, or have the spores somehow affected his mind? Maybe his transformation isn’t complete and the spores are still “modifying” him in some way. Fascinating possibilities.

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  1. James, growing up in the Great Pacific North West, as it is respected today and the return of the Bald Eagles I am afraid may be taken for granted. I remember so major trash along the roadways and the smog in L.A. living in the Midwest now, their story is the burning of the Cuyahoga River. We must learn from history. Preech Brother! Preech!


  2. building safe zones for people’s feelings – this had such an amazing truth in it. we often worry what people think or feel and make excuses and allowances for rude bad thinking.


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