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Rose Bay was one of those posh Sydney suburbs great for tourist shopping and loaded with outdoor activities. It had golf courses, tennis courts, and of course, the beach. Walking down the narrow alley splashed with color, Demetrius Lauer was not entertained. This was the way he went. Unless Dem could surprise his prey, it would get messy.
Despite Aus’ gun laws, he’d managed to buy a Colt 1911M from a “collector” he knew. Ethan Keating was a dangerous serial killer and fugitive wanted in five countries. The bounty on him was dead or alive. Dem didn’t care which.
One again, I’m participating in Rochelle Wisoff-Fields’ 17 March 2023 edition of Friday Fictioneers. The idea is to use the image above as a prompt for crafting a short story or poem no more than 100 words long. My word count is 99.
It was fairly easy to Google the location so I didn’t have to make up someplace from scratch. In spite of a bright colors and festive nature of Rose Bay, I immediately imagined something sinister going on. I had to look up gun laws for Australia since I didn’t want my bounty hunter to be unarmed. Laws are made to be broken.
I gave him a distinctive name just for the fun of it, and styled him after the old “hard-boiled detectives” in pulp fiction. If I ever develop the character, I’ll have to make him more interesting.
To read other stories based on the prompt, visit inlinkz.
To read some of my published works, try Ice, an adventure on the high seas in the far future where the fire goddess has banished all ice from the Earth. But there’s a hideous mystery waiting for Captain Ki-Moon and the crew of the Star of Jindo at the bottom of the world.
The Haunting of the Ginger’s Regret: In this novelette, space freighter pilot Kam Naji has acquired a replacement ship for his lost vessel from an unusual source. It’s a fine spacecraft but it comes with something extra…a ghost.
The fantasy anthology Fantastic Schools, Volume Six features my magical school short story “The Price.” 13-year-old Christopher Greenleaf wakes up in the dorms one morning to find the school almost totally deserted. Can he, 14-year-old Tamika Bendertwill, the school’s star student, and non-magic using cook Lisa Sakamoto solve the mystery before they too disappear?
Interesting story
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Thanks, Sadje.
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You’re welcome
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I quite like a good old-fashioned hard-boiled bounty hunter, that would be enough to get me hooked, if he was on an interesting case.
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Interesting for 99 words. 😉
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Lots of good details that bring the story to life.
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Thank you.
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You’re welcome.
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I wonder what happens if the police catch him? ‘I’m a bounty hunter, mate – killing him doesn’t count as murder, just gimme the money.’
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Depends on who is paying the bounty. Maybe a government with enough pull can get him out of a jam.
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Dem certainly means business!
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Yes he does. Thanks.
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Good start for a hide and see adventure!
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*seek
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Thank you.
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Fun story. Would make a great movie.
There is always a black market for guns in Aust. Also, people can own them but there are strict rules.
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This is a bounty hunter from another country. He couldn’t bring a gun in from the outside, so he had to find a contact in Aus. Fortunately, he’s connected all around the world. BTW, thanks. I’m considering an idea for him.
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i need to know more. a sequel to this story will be most welcome. 🙂
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It would take a novel which I’m thinking about. However, I have to finish the novel I’m working on first. Thanks.
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good luck on that novel. 🙂
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Thanks.
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Dear James,
A tale of intrigue.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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I’m an oddball. I took a tourist trap and turned it into the scene of a murder.
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Messy, indeed. Well done.
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Oh yes. It’s about to become really messy. Thanks.
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Dead or alive, things are about to get exciting!
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You bet.
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Intriguing!
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Thanks.
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Nicely done, James. Intriguing hook to pull in for more.
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Thank you, Bill.
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Great take…I think he’s been to the ‘Mindstrong Hub’ in the alley or he could be the owner (you’ll have to read my story to see what I mean 🤣)
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I already did. Thanks.
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I definitely want to read more! Intriguing.
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I’m thinking about it but I have other projects I need to finish first. Thanks.
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Sinister, this killer sounds a nasty piece
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Indeed. Thanks.
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