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“What’s a tchotchke?” Jessica was the youngest of the cousins exploring Bubbe’s house. The grownups were either in the kitchen or watching the game on TV.
“Just a bunch of junk I think,” answered Michael. He was the oldest and annoyed because his Mom told him to watch the rest of the kids.
“You mean like knick-knacks? Bubbe sure has a lot seashells for someone living in Missouri.” Joel knew just enough Yiddish to “get it,” but his older sister Rachel knew more.
“It’s also a pretty girl,” she said. “Like the one reading the Torah for her bat mitzvah.”
It’s Wednesday and once again time to participate in Rochelle Wisoff-Fields’ 6 December 2024 edition of Friday Fictioneers. The idea is to use the image above as the prompt for crafting a poem or short story no more than 100 words long. My word count is exactly 100.
I had to look up the word tchatchkes (it’s in the image’s filename) which can mean either a bunch of knick-knacks or trinkets or a pretty girl or woman. I could “get” the seashells but what was I to do with the small figure of a girl reading from a Torah scroll?
There seemed only one answer so I took it.
Oh, if you didn’t know, “Bubbe” is Yiddish for “Grandma.”
To read other stories based on the prompt, visit inlinkz.
My short story “The Book of Names” is now available in the anthology Shoot the Devil 3: Martyr’s Militia. It’s a collection of tales chronicling the ages old battle of good vs. evil, mainly from a Christian perspective.
My story is a little more circumspect, although it does lean heavily on demonology and how the final utterance of one Name will defeat all evil. I hope some of you pick up a copy and have a read. Thanks.


Great use of the girl
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When applied to a pretty girl, bat mitzvah or no, I believe it is always in the singular form, “tchatchkeh”, meaning an ornament — someone who would adorn the arm of her father, or any young man she might favor.
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I figured I’d get something wrong but let’s just say these kids didn’t know as much as they thought they did. 😉
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Dear James,
The pretty girl reference is a new one on me. I’ve heard Shayna Maydeleh. Nice you picked up on my bat mitzvah statue. It was gift from a friend after I did my late in life ceremony.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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I missed the girl and that she was reading the Torah. Nice conversational story.
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Thanks, Clare.
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Cute story. You covered all of the bases.
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Thanks.
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You’re welcome, James.
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I knew the meaning, but not the spelling of the word. Thanks!
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Thanks for commenting, Bon.
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I really liked this. Did not know the other meaning of “tchotchke,” I always enjoy learning new things from these stories 🙂
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Thanks, Linda.
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Well, still learning! I had no idea about tchatchke and bat mitzvah so thanks for the lesson. Nice story, James.
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Thank you, Nancy.
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I enjoyed how you interpreted the prompt.
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Thanks, Dawn.
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Nice use of the double meaning of the word. Fun story!
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Thanks, Angela.
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