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Elizabeth left the dorm room letting her eyes adjust to the daylight past the bicycle and gate. At thirty, it was a stretch for her to play the role of a co-ed at the university, but that’s what it took this time.
She’d been a professional for ten years. This was the first job where she felt anxious. She took a few steps forward and forced down her emotions. She had to treat it like any other contract.
Except it wasn’t just another hit. Somewhere on campus was the man who had killed her sister. She would make him pay.
It’s Wednesday and once again time to participate in Rochelle Wisoff-Fields’ 13 December 2024 edition of Friday Fictioneers. The idea is to use the image above as a prompt for crafting a poem or short story no more than 100 words long. My word count is exactly 100.
I very, very loosely adapted my WIP for this entry. My actual story is set in Las Vegas in 1953 and involves a private detective, gangsters, showgirls, and casinos. However it is still essentially about a woman with a particular set of skills searching for her sister’s killer.
To read the other stories based on the prompt, visit inlinkz.
My short story “The Book of Names” is now available in the anthology Shoot the Devil 3: Martyr’s Militia. It’s a collection of tales chronicling the ages old battle of good vs. evil, mainly from a Christian perspective.
My story is a little more circumspect, although it does lean heavily on demonology and how the final utterance of one Name will defeat all evil. I hope some of you pick up a copy and have a read. Thanks.


Very nicely done, James! I like your new profile pic, too 🙂
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Thanks. The old one is ten years old and I felt I was being disingenuous about my appearance. This one was taken a few weeks ago.
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I hear ya… Mind you, you haven’t changed much outside of the glasses 🙂
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Thanks. Living inside of my own skin, I’ve noticed some differences.
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Oh, I believe you on that! 🙂
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A great opener for a murder mystery/get the bad guy book!
And I noticed the glasses. I think they make you look professorial 🙂
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Thanks and thanks, Linda.
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So she has been contracted by someone who wants the killer dead? Bonus! Sounds like someone who needs to die.
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Actually, she’s working for herself.
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Ah, so she can claim the expenses on her taxes 😉
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She typically gets paid “under the table.”
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Always nice when you find your work rewarding. 😉
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Indeed.
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Dear James,
Intriguing beginning. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks, Rochelle.
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the ending was totally unexpected. great twist.
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Thanks.
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Oh, great intrigue, James!
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Thanks, Brenda.
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Revenge killing… tastes sweet, doesn’t it? Great story.
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Thanks, Bon.
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You had me fooled, I thought she was an actress and then came the twist! Well done and intriguing.
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Thanks.
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