Going Home To Mother

Crook tree moon

PHOTO PROMPT © Sandra Crook

The full moon and late winter made her heart beat fast as she looked up from the pit. She had been with her husband for the long darkness and cold, and while she reigned with him as Queen, the honor always grew tiresome, even loathsome by now.

Soon she would see mother again and like the rest of the world bask in the warmth of each rising dawn when Spring brought new life to the wicked and wise alike.

She made the usual preparations and bade her husband farewell for another season and then two. Persephone began her ascent home.

It’s Wednesday and time once again to participate in Rochelle Wisoff-Fields 21 March 2025 edition of Friday Fictioneers. The idea is to use the image above as the prompt for crafting a poem or short story of no more than 100 words. My word count is exactly 100.

When I looked at Sandra’s photo, I got the sense of a very early morning, a full moon, and crisp cold air. Looking up at light made me think of hope, and since tomorrow is the beginning of spring and the mythic tale of Persephone is one of my favorites, I decided to run with it.

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24 thoughts on “Going Home To Mother

    • Thanks, Rochelle. The myth of Persephone marrying Pluto, Lord of the Underworld, and the compromise eventually reached between him and her mother Demeter is, according to legend, why we have the seasons. It’s fun to think about.

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  1. A lovely write, James. Like Rochelle, I need to read up on my mythology – honestly, it shouldn’t be that hard, my niece wrote a wonderful graphic novel all about Greek gods and then some!

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  2. You’ve made me curious about Persephone. I used to be quite familiar with all those folks, but this one is eluding me. There’s a nice, haunting feel about your story today.

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  3. A poetic tale that conjures up the chill and barrenness of winter and the warmth of Spring but with that evenness that each season has its place. Nice!

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