Police said that two people died in the car crash. It certainly seemed like they should have. Only I knew they originally did die, but then, I saw it happen yesterday, before it occurred.
How do you stop a car accident unless you’re involved? Fortunately, one car was driven by an Uber driver and he didn’t have a passenger when I saw the crash in my vision.
So I became the passenger. All I had to do was distract the driver, his name is Gerald, a few seconds before impact, changing the car’s trajectory. Sure, they still hit and they got hurt, but no one died. Gerald even realized that I probably saved his life. He just doesn’t know I did it on purpose.
I got a dislocated shoulder for my trouble, but no one died. The sight, my hereditary gift or curse depending on your perspective, was satisfied.
My name is Brian Vail and I see visions. I wonder what I’ll see next?
The photo above is a real car accident reported here. I like these little “photo challenges,” and since I had just a little time on my hands, I thought I’d give myself one. But what to write about?
I decided to write a flash fiction piece about my character Brian Vail, who I introduced in Tunnel Vision and who subsequently appeared in The Ghost of Natalie Edwards. For both of those stories, I had to write quite a bit to do the set up for the story, but here, I managed just a tiny tale while making it a full story.
Brian Vail next appears in What I See When I Look At You.
4 thoughts on “Seeing Means Changing”
Excellent progression from a mystery solver via vision to prevention of tragedy via vision, but needs more story development to fit with the previous stories…did you switch to flash fiction?
I wrote it off the cuff. I was spending the day with my son, but he hasn’t been sleeping well and needed a nap. I wanted to write something but realized I didn’t have a lot of time, so I experimented with injecting Brian Vail into a flash fiction story just for giggles.
Aha! So the ability does go further than just seeing an unchangeable future… It is starting to look more like a gift to me.
Thanks, fictionspawn. There should be a link at the bottom of this wee tale leading to the next story.
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