It had to be as beautiful as possible, but because of the ice sculpture’s size, Victor had to use automated industrial saws and chisels. It didn’t help that he was working alone in a freezing warehouse, but he required absolute secrecy.
He sat behind the console of the remote control unit and directed robots with heated metal arms to smooth out the edges.
“It will be alright, my dear. This will be the most elegant piece of artwork I have ever produced.”
The rented semi was out back, the temperature inside adjusted to below freezing. He’d arrange an “accidental” explosion here to cover his work, and then hide her away someplace that would always be winter cold.
“Perfect. Absolutely perfect.” Victor stood and pulled his gloves on, then walked up to the twelve-foot tall frigid form. Through the pristine pure ice, he could see her dressed in elegant silk, now as cold as his own heart. “You will never leave me for another, Nora. I shall keep our love frozen in time forever.”
I wrote this for the 170th FFfAW Challenge. The idea is to use the image above as a prompt for crafting a piece of flash fiction between 100 and 175 words long. My word count is 174.
The photo looked like some sort of ice sculpture, so I looked up the basics of making one. I also knew I wanted to make it big.
I borrowed the character names from an old Batman villain called Mr. Freeze. In the 1990s “Batman the Animated Series,” he was Victor Fries (pronounced “Freeze”), who, while trying to cryogenically freeze his wife to keep her from dying of an illness, is interrupted by his corrupt boss. He messes up the process, killing Nora, and changing Fries to someone who needs a sub-zero environment to survive. Thus a super villain is born.
In the case of my wee tale, I didn’t give Victor superpowers, but I did turn him into a homicidally jealous artist.
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Very “chilling” story, James! I like what you did with the prompt! A jealous lover freezing their love forever! Great story!
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Thanks, Joy. Brrrr. He gave her a chilly reception.
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LOL! He sure did!
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Truly bone-chilling!
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Indeed. Thank you.
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A chilling write and as always enjoyed the genesis of this one.
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Thanks, yarnspinner.
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Chilling is the word. I wonder if he ever thaws her out for special occasions…
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Pretty sure that would ruin the corpse. He wants to preserve her in ice forever (not that such a thing would work in real life).
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Excellent take James.
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Thank you.
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Aah, I got Mr. Freeze around 3/4ths through the story 🙂
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Good for you. 😀
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Oh dear, now that is bad, but written so nice and breezily. Well done.
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Thanks.
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