She always manifested first for her life was the cause. Mist rose under the Brooklyn Bridge that May 30th as the twelve appeared. The people who were present either were unable to perceive them through a lack of faith or chose to ignore what they considered the impossible.
After all this time, those few who could see them but didn’t know what they were thought them to be performers in some macabre cosplay. When they tried to approach any of them, they wavered and vanished. The ghosts of the bridge’s tragic past were sentinels and did not speak cautionary tales.
It’s Wednesday and time again to participate in Rochelle Wisoff-Fields’ 25 April 2025 edition of Friday Fictioneers. The idea is to use the image above as the prompt for crafting a poem or short story no more than 100 words long. My word count is exactly 100.
Once I discovered Roger’s photo on Instagram and saw it was of the Brooklyn Bridge, I started looking for disasters and tragedies associated with it (the bridge, not his photo). Here’s what I found thanks to Google’s AI Overview:
The Brooklyn Bridge, a marvel of engineering, was completed and opened to the public in 1883. However, the excitement of the opening was marred by a tragic event known as the Brooklyn Bridge stampede.
On May 30, 1883, a large crowd was enjoying the bridge, particularly on Memorial Day which was always observed on May 30 at that time. As the crowd was traversing the Manhattan approach stairs, a woman tripped and fell, which triggered a panicked reaction within the dense crowd. The sudden surge of panic caused people to fall and get crushed, resulting in a horrific scene.
The stampede resulted in the death of 12 people and caused serious injuries to 36 others. The Brooklyn Bridge Company was eventually acquitted of negligence in lawsuits stemming from the incident. The event became a cautionary tale about crowd control and safety in public spaces, and it highlights the tragic consequences that can arise when panic spreads through a large group.
Of course, I wrote a ghost story.
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Thanks for the ghostly history. I like it.
Tracey
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Thanks, Tracey.
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If only there were people I could select not to see through lack of faith
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James, thank you for sharing your writing process. Good story.
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Thanks, Lisa.
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You’re welcome.
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an interesting piece of history. thanks for sharing.
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Thanks.
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Amazing story, James. Moody and realistic.
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Thanks, Will.
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An interest ghost story that tells of how tragic events strike many past construction.
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Thank you, James.
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How could you not have written a ghost story after discovering so much about the bridge’s history?
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Indeed. Thanks, Keith.
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What an interesting history and process, resulting in a well-told ghost story.
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Thank you.
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Thanks for the background info about the Brooklyn Bridge stampede = and I like how you connected it to a thrilling mini ghost story!
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Thanks for the kind words.
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🙂
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